Tuesday, October 13, 2009

spontaneous Me

In the poem “ Spontaneous Me “ it start off as loving nature but hen turns into a

PG-13 Movie . I t talks about loving love and the to women ,which I don’t believe that

he women but lust for women but then it talks about children . Which makes me

believe that he want a son that that can lead on his father name. Then what is the

the point to all of the plant related parts of the poem . The random plant related parts

mean where he meets women so he can find the one to have a son and a wife.

The author of the poem is descriptive it gives his opinion and facts of the area

with saying what specific colors he point . Which makes thinks that he also an artist and a

observer because also love the female body. The author knows what he talking about .

But he could be making this up in his mind so must have a good imagination to be so

descriptive in writing telling me that this guy is not a amateur when come to writing .

In the poem it states “ The great chastity of paternity, to match the great chastity

of maternity .... Till I saturate what shall produce boy s to fill my place when I’m

through.” Taking the statement apart that he to have a son to fill his place when he dies .

This is just the king of England got multiple wives just so he can have a son to fill his

manly egoistic realm of thought cause if you have a boy when he get married he keep

his last name meaning that you will still is alive through him . Men do want to live for

ever and with a son so they can they can live forever .

ANNe bradstreet

Anne Bradstreet is a new kind o f Puritan one that goes dirty then clean this Anne

Bradstreet. A puritan that writes love notes to her husband that need to be more

concern with housework and praising God . She got her mind in the air that nee d

to come down to earth and concentrate on her puritan customs, which is more, required

of a women . Need to get her mind out the gutter no man should take your train of

thought and need to get back, to her puritan business . I wonder if the love is vice-versa

because she have to put her love out their that far . Is it one those situations that she need

to show her more because she can’t get enough love that need from her husband

because he keep puritan belief strong .

Anne Bradstreet has a sincere love for her according to what read about

in the poem” To My Dear and Loving Husband”. The love she feel is sincere and

true but does she really needs to go over board with love situations . Anne Bradstreet

compare her love to priceless jewels that means she give away riches just for her

husband . To myself she walking on sunshine with he r man and love him so much

I bet she can see a halo .

I know that she is in love with her man with out a shadow of a doubt . I don’t

believe that she doing it just to get attention from her husband . This true love

and know she can see an halo. That must be the reason she love her man so much .

PHIllis

Phillis Wheatly was born as in Africa and was bought to Boston in 1761. Was

bought by John Wheatly to be company for his wife, Susannah Wheatly. Phillis Wheatly

started to learn how to read and write . Then wrote a poem about George Whitefield, an

preacher during the first Great Awakening , made her famous . Phillis went to England to

get some help to get he first book some support from Benjamin Franklin. Couldn’t stay

to see her book to get publish because Susannah Wheatly was dying . Susannah died in

1774 and later her husband in 1778 the same year Phillis Wheatly got married to John

Peters . In 1784, Philly died next to her third child (other two children already died from

causalities ) and was buried with her child .

Five years after Phillis Wheatly death letters and poems were found and to some

speculation there is more to come for the late Phillis Wheatly . According to the poems

and letters found Phillis Wheatly wrote about politics also, like her love with George

Washington and other political queries. What got my attention the most when she got

over whelm with wanting of freedom . Being a slave gave herself a reason to love the

idea of freedom especially to time the American Revolution was up during the time .

According to letters in the article the “sons of liberty “ shouted out for freedom which

made she believe that God implanted us all with want to live freely . Which to me is a

amazing philosophy to live by when you have been oppressed by for a while .

Phillis Wheatly poem “ On Being brought From Africa to America “ it is

stated in the article that slavery is like a legal stealing someone from away from there

whi9ch is the feeling behind the poem . That it is unfair to be taken when not asked .

Only someone of an evil mind can do this to a person . In the letter and the poem to

George Washington Phillis give high praise to him because of his popular stature .

It also make Washington an s a high noble in a sense house Phillis do it .

Phillis Wheatly had to go through with her family dying on but she worked

though it as long as she was able do . She is an inspiration o woman to give up on

life when it gives you lemons . That is what Phillis Wheatly means to me. Whit hope of

finding more of her items
The poem “Huswifery” putting finding the Lord and letting the Lord save your

soul into a role of a woman’s work in the house . This was in a use like a sermon to

preach what the Lord need to do for yourself. The poem use a very rural form of speaking

which made understanding the poem more in-depth but it was simple enough to get

through . The sermon in the poem used a lot of symbolisms to show the way woman’s

work relate to each other . While giving examples is a great way to teach the word of God

to people in that time to give a better understanding of things . It also still good to break

the sermon down to get a way better under standing as demonstrated in the following

paragraph .

The first paragraph broken down makes mention of the use of the spinning

wheel to thread lien . The use of the spool to holds the thread and use of a reel also .

The wheel is to mend the souls to Christ , the spool is the soul of the body ,and the reel is

to be a way to bring in the souls like the a conversation like in the poem to bring others to

Christ . The use of symbolism is strong in this part of the sermon and to end result to

show that souls are a big need .

The second paragraph is about bring a multitude of souls to the Lord can save

them from their sins . To make the more happy so that the can be a feel on a realm of

paradise . In the third paragraph it is to in related to the bible verse Matthew 5:15 which

states ‘Let your light so shine before men, that they may see your good works, and glorify

your Father, which is in heaven.’’ Which means show that what person is supposed to

ct like is you gave your soul to God . Show how you walk , talk and think in when you

have given your soul to God .



In conclusion the women do their own work to god in the chores that they do

to keep their household in check, which is their ministry .I also believe that that this

sermon was made in the way that glorify women’s work because they don’t want to feel

bad by imitating the Half-Way Covent to let women be apart of the church. So they

don’t just look like they letting anyone in just for their money not because the want souls

bring to Christ.

Sunday, August 30, 2009

I’m here to write about I think about the essay “ Is Google Making Us Stupid?”

This essay talks about how we are using the Internet too much and how is changing the

way we think. It is propose that when we use the Internet and use search engines that we

are skimming info instead of finding a book and looking for hardcore answers to

answer questions or projects inside words of the text . Which will make us lazy to read or

find info in a book. According to the text one person said that he cant read War and

Peace anymore because now he can only skim the book now according to the passage

that I have read. Now I will give out my two cents about the matter.

In text of this essay the Internet is essentially making us dumb but I believe it just

giving out a helping hand to some that need to work faster . The author of the article

uses sources from a few people he met on a blog that the can read as much as they use

too. Wow! Getting or finding bloggers to say anything is excellent source but I say not !

How am I supposed to trust people on a blog when you can say anything on it not a very

good source. The source with the University College London don’t talk on the matter at

that people do become stupid by using the Internet not so at all . The experiment show

that people do skim their information is true but sometimes skimming over things is

needed. If skimming is bad why is it taught how to do in school so it must be right and

must be an okay thing to do.

It is an understandable idea to believe that Internet is making us stupid because,

we are using it a lot and becoming more dependent upon the use of the Internet . This is a

good argument to go upon but the Internet is just a stepping-stone of our life and meant

to help the people who needs it . There is a time when it start to get out of control and

then people start to let the Internet do thinking for them . The Internet is not meant for

that and by letting the Internet think for you is one of the reasons this essay was made and

I wouldn’t have to be writing this two-page lit response on “Is Google Making Us

Stupid”. The Internet is a great tool to use in life and without technological advance how

can we grow so it is about not taking the Internet with search engines too far . That

means it is good to use the brain every once in a while.


What really got my attention when the article talk about little bit about the

founders of Google Sergy Brin and Larry Paige . According to the article the founders of

of Google what to make Google have an artificial intelligence and to send info

straight into our brain by connecting our brains to the Internet . Me personally I feel like

they are trying to take over our humanity to make us smarter but without intelligence but

with an artificial intelligence. Most likely they are planning to be ahead of the

competition but taking away someone’s humanity for is wrong on so many levels.


In conclusion Google is not making us stupid but is taking over minds instead .

This can go to a philological way of thinking . If you write down every down in your life

how going to make your brain stronger ,faster, and smarter . Also, will this make

lazy if you have to write everything down of remembering with your brain . These

statement have made make myself think even more how we have become dependent

On written information than remembering then I guess I some cases Google have made

us stupid . So what should I do about that ?
I’m here to write a two-page literature on “The Iroquois Creation Story” by

David Cusick . David Cusick was the first Native American to record on his

own the founding myths of his native people . That is one of the reasons his article was

chosen over other version of the creation story of the Iroquois nation . Next, I write

about the myth that will call Cusick creation story but he calls his own work history of

his people .

The Iroquois Creation Story is a story about two brothers one had a good mind

and the other had a bad mind. While the good brother was making the earth a nice place

with good creations such as waters filled with fish, lots of different animals, and animals

that can inhabit the forest. Then, the brother with the good mind made the Indians with

trees growing with fruit on them making their lives like a paradise. While the good mind

was making the universe the bad mind started to make things that can hurt man but the

good fixed it back up as it use to . The bad mind tried to make man but end up making

apes then became envious of his brother for doing something he himself can’ t do.

The bad mind offered a challenge to his brother the good mind that who ever gains

victory in the challenge should govern the universe; and make the appointed day of the

contest. The good accepted the challenge. They both cam e on the day the challenge was

set and for two day tearing up trees and mountains but then the good mind gained

victory over his brother by using a deer’s antlers .The good mind crushed his brother into

the earth and the last words of the bad mind were he would have equal control over souls

after their death. The bad mind sinks down to forever doom and became the Evil Spirit .

After the fight the Good mind repaired the earth, visited the people, and retired on the

earth.

The summary of the creation story is very similar to the story when God kick out

Lucifer from but with a few differences . Lucifer was the worshiper of God angel

But his vanity cloud his mind and wanted to be over God and got an army of angels to

rebel against God . As always-good verses evil wins so Lucifer was kicked of heaven

with all the other angels who followed him was sent to the earth . Now Lucifer got a

new name for him the devil. Now the devil tries to kill people before the can ask God to

them so they can be with him for all eternity.

There was a lot of comparisons in the before creation story of Lucifer to the

Creation Story of the Iroquois . The first comparison was made the bad mind was jealous

of the good mind like how Lucifer was Jealous of how God get to be number one and

he can’t . The Second comparison is that the God beat the devil just like the good mind

defeated the bad mind when they both had fought . The third comparison I’ve found

was that the bad mind was sent to the bottom of the earth like when Lucifer was sent

when he lost and was able to take control of souls when death come a knocking to man.

The final caparison of the two stories is the name change of the two characters of

Lucifer to the Devil and the evil mind into the Evil Spirit . Now to my conclusion

paragraph .

In the two summaries of stories had a lot of thing in common . To myself that is

just the coolest thing to see how it is a small world after all in some cases. Now I

wonder what else I have in common with the world. I will love to know what else I have

in common with different ethic backgrounds I t really does excite me a lot .

Thursday, August 20, 2009

Diction

How would it change the meaning and feeling of the line if , instead of lipsticked girl , the author wrote girl with lipstick on?


It won't make it seem that this girl stand out at all